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Love is Like the Winter Rain by ~InkSpills:iconInkSpills:



Love Is Like The Winter Rain


Time heals wounds
But scars remain
I can feel that love
A love like winter rain.

With shelter from storm
I saw love returned
I looked into her eyes
And could see the fire burned.

In a hellish alcove
Mistakes were made
Things said foul
And when our eyes did meet
I saw that love;
And i watched it fade.

For times long stretching
I couldn't look at you
I feared what I would see
When finally I did look
Like a mirror in your eyes;
All I saw was me.

Sure I loved once
And maybe I still do
Yeah I loved once
And I hope she did too.
©2005-2009 ~InkSpills
:iconinkspills:

Author's Comments

My first poem for a long time. Hopefully it'll get me back to writing on a more regular basis.

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:iconeume:
I love the way it's written. Its sad, and very good.
:iconemos-must-die:
well written. clever ending. it was emotive and created a strong tone and atmosphere.
but dude...pretty emo. i mean your 15. whos fucked you that bad?
either way, your poetry. and not basing totally on the writing itself it's good.
:iconalive-in-torment:
Awesum, poem rocks, it digs a 3k deep hole and burries any attempt jordan's ever made at a poem

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